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Anir@Authr's avatar

The silence between these words does more work than most poems do with a hundred. 'Ouch!' hitting harder than any elaborate metaphor could — that's the kind of controlled restraint that takes real courage to leave on the page. Beautifully fractured.

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Your analysis is spot on. It’s a compelling point, and I’m totally on the same page as you.

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